Perfecting your blog title

2 tips you shouldn’t follow when writing blog titles: use numbers, and don’t use you

Why you should use numbers in your blog titles (and why you shouldn’t rely on quick statistics)

By Mikayla Henault

I recently found an article online that cited an interesting piece of information: “a study of 150,000 headlines revealed that odd-numbered list headlines have a 20% better click-through rate than even-numbered headlines.” Intrigued and wanting to know more, I naturally googled the statistic and found another article that referenced it, but it also lacked any further explanation. I realized the best way to get the context I was looking for was to read through the HubSpot report both articles cite as the source of that statistic. Interestingly, while reading through the report I never found that exact stat, or anything remotely close. I still don’t know whether or not it’s true, or any other context behind the stat. What I did discover was a bunch of other statistics about blog titles. The report uses research compiled from over 3.3 million blog titles to craft a nice, statistically-backed list of “do’s and don’ts” for writing blog titles. While this sounds straightforward, going through their list of guidelines really got me thinking.

Many of the blog titles we’re used to seeing on social media from sites like HuffPo and Buzzfeed, use the exact language the report said not to use. I was taught that referencing the reader, through words like “you” and “your,” is typically thought of as beneficial in marketing, but apparently not in blog titles. According to the report, referencing the reader actually causes a decrease in CTR, page views per session, and conversions. Other words that decreased results were “tip,” “amazing,” and “best.” These findings seemed crazy to me. Either every notable site was writing blog titles wrong, or something wasn’t adding up in HubSpot’s research. So, I decided to do my own little experiment to see if I could confirm their findings.

For the experiment, I wrote a blog post about college essay topics, targeting high schoolers and their parents. Using the data from the HubSpot research, I created two headlines for the blog. In the first title, I tried to follow all of the rules, and in the second I purposely broke them.

Good: 3 ways to pick the perfect topic for your college essay

Bad: How to pick the perfect topic for your college essay

It felt almost impossible to write a blog title that didn’t go against at least one of the “bad” things in the report. And I don’t think I am the only one who feels this way, the HubSpot website is full of blog titles that go against their research. Admittedly, even my “good” title didn’t exactly follow all of the rules- again, the use of the word “your” is frowned upon.

Facebook ad with good title
Facebook ad with bad title
Instagram ad good title
Instagram ad bad title

Using the two headlines I implemented A/B tests through Facebook ads. Rather than implementing one test, I decided to break things down further with two campaigns targeting different audiences/platforms. One campaign targeted high schoolers on Instagram, and the other targeted parents on Facebook. Both campaigns were set up as an A/B tests using the same graphic, but testing the two titles. We assigned the same budget to both tests and let them run over the weekend to see if there were any significant findings.

Campaign results

What was interesting right off the bat was the difference in performance between the test targeting high schoolers and the test targeting parents. The parent campaign had much better results, with 69 clicks over the weekend compared to the mere 9 by high schoolers. There was also a big difference in the A/B testing results between the two demographics. The high schooler test had a clear winner, the ad with the “good” title received a 200% better CTR than the ad with the “bad” title. While of course this statistic sounds amazing, it was really only a difference of 5 clicks, again proving how easy it is to manipulate data into small tidbits without providing the more important context behind the data.

The campaign targeting parents, while more successful overall, did not have a clear winner between the two titles. There was only a .02% difference in CTR between the two ads, with the higher CTR belonging to the ad with the “bad” title. The only piece of data that was somewhat significant was the cost per result between the two ads, and again that data lies in favor of the “bad” title.

Way too often we get caught up on trivial guidelines of what we should and shouldn’t be doing. We lose focus on what really matters. Especially in marketing. Companies like HubSpot are in the business of making content. They’re constantly putting out lists and statistics trying to influence us, and they’re good at it. They are the kings of inbound marketing, so of course they use inbound principles when doing their own marketing. Their main way of marketing themselves is through their articles, which mention their own products with multiple calls to action throughout, which is contradictory in and of itself. With every article they get you to read, they get another opportunity to sell themselves. Therefore, the more articles they write, the more potential customers they reach. Oftentimes they take fairly similar articles and change up the title to try to reach even more people, and get another chance. 

So, the next time you read an article or report, make sure you really think about what it’s saying and look for the context behind it. Back to the HubSpot example, their research used blogs from over 100,000 different sites, with a wide range of subjects and target audiences. There were a lot more variables in the data than the titles of the blogs, making much of the research unreliable. But the way they present their data makes it look pretty and easy, and in the world of unknowns in marketing, it is nice to have a “known” statistic to rely on. It is a lot easier to be confident in the work you are doing if there is a fact or statistic that backs it. So, the more data we have to back our ideas and our work, the better we feel. Even if that data isn’t completely accurate.

What it comes down to is this: don’t buy into everything you see online. Think critically. Do more research. Follow your gut. Whether the original stat I found about odd vs even numbers is correct, I am still unsure. What I am sure of is that a blog post can be successful, as long as it has a title.

Mikayla Henault

Mikayla Henault is a senior at Nichols College majoring in marketing. She also interns in the Marketing department at Nichols.

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